Before I went to AIS I just know a little bit of English. When I came to AIS every subject is all in English. I’m shaking a lot because I don’t have enough brave to ask. When I enter my first class, I just find my sit and quietly take out my notebook and sit there and listening to my teacher introduce him self. And he stared to calling everybody to introduce them self. When it’s my turn I’m shaking a lot and I am just stand there looking around for a while and start telling him my name. Next day he gives us a quick quiz and I answer none of them. And I know my English is every bad. I start to thinking outside of the box. In the evening, I started to learn more English and learn more to write in English. When the test came I can answer some of the questions, and I know this study is working for me. And I’m starting to do it again and again. After that I achieve my goal.
I think you should have more details. You don't have the introduction or beginning paragraph and your resolution. Your conflict and climax is unclear.
Trả lờiXóaGood work choosing an idea John. That sounds like it would be really frightening to encounter. You have an okay story line but you're missing a lot of detail. Work on adding more about how you felt and the specifics of what happened to you. Tell us more about your emotions and feelings during this time. What were you thinking?
Trả lờiXóau didnt have an intro, and the resolution. Try to add in some more details... :P
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